Monday, February 16, 2009

[341] Billboard/Buswrap R1, Stationary R2

Hey class, here's my comps, feedback is very appreciated. I completely threw away the brush stroke idea for my stationary and just used my icon as a graphic element, I was thinking of cherry blossoms blowing in the wind. Thanks Nick for the scatter brush idea, I sort of messed with it, but I had more control just placing the icons manually.








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  1. jennyxsanFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:45 AM

    I like billboard number 5 and bus wrap number 1. I like the gradient leading up to the logo. Maybe you want to consider a possible tag-line.

    -jenny

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    saw your stationery last class - gave you feedback.

    the bus wrap didnt need to have the horizontal bar across it. All your layouts are a bit static. I feel like the repetitive use of your icon takes away from the uniqueness of your logo.

    your billboards are not informative enough. although i do like the impact of the large logo in #1, but again its not really communicating much. Think beyond just using elements from the logo

    joe

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